Friday, October 09, 2009

I Miss Myself

I Miss Myself

 

My little girl hugs me, squeezes,

Daddy, I miss you when you’re at work.


I squeeze back, me too.


She commands my eyes with her question look,

you miss yourself?


We laugh and I say yes.


But, you’re there?

But I’m not.


6 comments:

  1. Anonymous10:28 am

    Beautiful Mark!

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  2. That is a lovely tender moment beautifully captured. And I know that there and not there feeling at work very well.

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  3. Very nice Mark. Almost makes me want to have kids.... ALMOST...

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  4. Superb Mark. An beautiful and illuminating father/daughter moment.

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  5. Hi Mark - really captured the working week in that short poem - and juxtaposing it with such a tender moment is fantastic!

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  6. Anonymous10:13 am

    How cool is this!
    Dig it

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